今天小編給大家?guī)?lái)一些托福干貨,!寫(xiě)作高分句子積累,!希望能夠?qū)Υ蠹覍?xiě)作有所幫助。?
一,、如何做到準(zhǔn)確的句子表達(dá)
1. 句型分析
英語(yǔ)的句型包括以下幾種,,簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)合句,、并列句,、并列復(fù)合句等。在新托福寫(xiě)作中,,一般使用復(fù)合句,,輔以并列句和并列復(fù)合句,當(dāng)然肯定要有簡(jiǎn)單句,,做到長(zhǎng)短句相結(jié)合,。下面摘抄幾個(gè)句子給大家認(rèn)識(shí)并分析一下復(fù)合句和并列復(fù)合句。
a. Even though I usually know what I have to say,, I cannot always express myself correctly in English.
這句話(huà)是一個(gè)復(fù)合句,由even though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,。
b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English,,withthe result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.
這句話(huà)中是一個(gè)復(fù)合句。with介詞結(jié)構(gòu)中,,有一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句對(duì)result進(jìn)行解釋說(shuō)明,。
c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts,, and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.
上句話(huà)是一個(gè)并列復(fù)雜句。and 連接了兩個(gè)句子,,是一個(gè)并列句;because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,。
2. 有問(wèn)題的句子的列舉
考生寫(xiě)的句子容易出現(xiàn)三個(gè)問(wèn)題:一是使用破碎句,二是使用接連句,,三是句子連接不正確,。
1). 破碎句
所謂破碎句,就是句子不完整,,通常是沒(méi)有謂語(yǔ)(或者說(shuō)謂語(yǔ)是動(dòng)詞的非謂語(yǔ)形式,,如分詞),或者是從句單獨(dú)成句,。
破碎句:She singing alone. (無(wú)謂語(yǔ),,singing是現(xiàn)在分詞)
正確句:She is singing alone.
破碎句:He did not come. Because he was sick. (從句單獨(dú)成句)
正確句:He did not come because he was sick.
2).接連句
所謂接連據(jù),就是兩個(gè)句子直接連在一起,,既未使用連詞,,也未使用正確的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。
接連句:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句一:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However,, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
正確句二:Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however,, they have greater freedom in planning their time.
3).句子連接不正確
所謂句子連接不正確,就是兩個(gè)獨(dú)立的句子之間以逗號(hào)連接,,這是不合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法的,。正確的做法是以連詞、分號(hào),、冒號(hào),、句號(hào)等連接兩個(gè)句子。
不正確句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change,, there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
正確句:Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change,, so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.
二、高分表達(dá)
除了在句式上長(zhǎng)短句相結(jié)合準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)外,,建議新托??忌褂靡恍┨厥獾木涫剑允咕湫投鄻踊?。句型多樣化也是作文得到高分的條件之一,。除了之前經(jīng)常提到的高分句式,如倒裝句,、強(qiáng)調(diào)句,、狀語(yǔ)前置、插入語(yǔ)等,另外一個(gè)句式的多樣變化,,即主語(yǔ)多樣化,。下面將列舉幾個(gè)句子概括介紹前面四種句型,而重點(diǎn)分析主語(yǔ)多樣化,。
正常句:Luck only works in extreme cases.
倒裝句:only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定詞位于句首的倒裝,。)
正常句:The internet provides people access to the latest information.
強(qiáng)調(diào)句:It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (強(qiáng)調(diào)the internet)
正常句:The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.
狀語(yǔ)前置句:Along with the accelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句:However,, new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.
插入語(yǔ):New zoos,, however, try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (連詞however做插入語(yǔ))
主語(yǔ)多樣化的例子
1. 她突然想到了一個(gè)主意,。
She suddenly had an idea.
通常情況下,,考生會(huì)馬上對(duì)這句話(huà)進(jìn)行翻譯,基本不會(huì)動(dòng)句子結(jié)構(gòu),。但是以人作為主語(yǔ)的英語(yǔ)句子總是不能夠很吸引人,,所以這個(gè)句子如果稍微做下修改,以后面的賓語(yǔ)“主意”做主語(yǔ),,這個(gè)句子會(huì)發(fā)生一些變化,。
An idea suddenly occurred to her.
2. 他開(kāi)車(chē)心不在焉,幾乎闖禍,。
He was absent-minded when driving,, and almost caused an accident.
這句話(huà)依然是拿人做主語(yǔ),稍微改一下,,把心不在焉這個(gè)形容詞的名詞形式做主語(yǔ),,會(huì)大不相同。
His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an accident.
3. 美利堅(jiān)合眾國(guó)創(chuàng)立于1789年,。
The United States of America was founded in 1789.
這句話(huà)沒(méi)有任何錯(cuò)誤,,但是不夠多樣,可以用時(shí)間作主語(yǔ),。
The year 1789 witnessed the founding of the United States of America.
三,、實(shí)用句型
1. It pays to make great efforts to prepare for TOEFL-ibt.
努力準(zhǔn)備新托福考試是值得的,。
2. Nothing is more important than to receive education.
沒(méi)有比接受教育更重要的了,。
3. The reason why the white-collars suffer increasing work-related stress is that they pursue work achievement in career.
白領(lǐng)壓力日益增加的原因是他們?cè)谑聵I(yè)上有所追求。